An illusion to behold....
A story untold...
A far away somewhere...
Can be reached from nowhere...
Yes you are the Mirage of my life !!!
A vanishing flame...
An already lost game...
A feeling so pure...
An omnipresent cure.....
Yes, you are the Mirage of my Life.
A shivering hold...
Unsolvable fold...
Wavering past glory...
A magical memory....
Yes you are Indeed the Mirage of my Life.
I cannot have you....
But I can still feel you....
I cannot reach you...
But can still enjoy your sight....
You are the ultimate Mirage of my Life!!!!
Just 10 minutes is what it took me to write this................!!
Just 10 minutes is what it took me to write this................!!
Most of the times life is like mirage, taking us for a ride. Nice poetry.
ReplyDeleteThats true indeed! Thank u sir!
ReplyDeleteSuper! Great! I enjoy reading your poems. Here is my big smile ^______^ for you and others.
ReplyDeleteAmazing Grace = Li-Chun Lee ^_^
ReplyDeleteThank u so so much Miss Li Chun Lee :)
ReplyDeletebeautiful poem written around a unique thought.. you are the mirage of my life..
ReplyDeleteWell done.. It's beautiful.
@kriti: ain't this a beautiful coincidence that we are fascinated by Mirages..... I happen to have written a poem of the same title:
ReplyDeleteYou're close enough for me to touch
Or could my mind be playing tricks on me again?
Dream walking to where you are
As time stood still.
Flitting images pass before me
A myriad of colors drifting in and out.
Glaring at something
But not knowing what.
A mirage that doesn't come alive.
Leaving a hollow feeling deep inside.
I'm left in this place
Where you don't even remember me.
I am empty, I am numb
Lose myself in countless dreams and images
Wishing they may just be real
And I'm really there with you.
But just like yesterday
And all the days before
Only an imprint of you survives,
I SUFFER IN SILENCE.
---asheil.July 9, 2011. Saturday.1415Hrs.---
@deepak - Thank you so much Sir!
ReplyDelete@sheila - its really a co-incidence and wonderful fact that we interpreted and described one beautiful image - a mirage - which actually isn;t there in real...but our thoughts have managed to visualise it...beautifully indeed!! Kudos!!!!
nice poem Kriti.. and the fact being you wrote it in just 10 min is really fantastic...love - Pooja
ReplyDelete@pooja - Thank you so much di :) Loves
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